omgsh mikey

Mm, very good. The only things I was suggest would be to definitely space out your paragraphs (it makes it so much easier to read) and there were some grammatical ...

HIM. Is an amazing band, just thought I'd say that =D. Eeeh. Not really. I don't like their sound much. But we're both entitled to our opinions. =D Everyday, I ...

This is really good. I like how you leave us hanging like that. I myself haven't ever been able to pull it off well, but this is perfect. Like scrambled_pages ...

I think it was great, but you did the period thing again. Remember, if you're saying something like, Bekka turned to him and said, "Blah blah" (hypothetical) then don't capitalize ...

I'm pretty sure that you're supposed to put commas instead of periods, like: “Ten thousand, my lord,” said the man. The figure took a step toward the men. “Is that ...